I have found that being part of a Photo Community is a valuable resource for improving both my image capturing and post processing techniques.
I have become a daily visitor and sometimes contributor to The Radiant Vista Community.
In this post, I thought I would take you through the evolution of an image from my post processing and alterations made based on suggestions by the Radiant Vista Community.
Here is the original capture of the Coquille River Lighthouse which is located in Bandon Oregon. The lighthouse was under restoration when I captured the image.
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NOTE: I do all my RAW file processing within Adobe Lightroom.
First steps:
- Created a virtual copy of the original
- Straightened and made initial crop to get a feel for how I want to compose the image for final output. Lightroom makes it easy to move the crop around to visualize the output image. Though I usually try to capture the image close to the final composition, I sometimes allow for possible post composition. In this case I was not sure how much of the water I wanted in the final image nor how much sky. Since the capture is 12.5 mp, cropping should not be an issue.
- Adjusted the white balance
- Use the Fill Light, Clarity and Highlight recovery tools to bring out the details of the rock out cropping, dune grass, and lighthouse texture. I sometimes find that the clarity and highlight adjustments will make the dust spots and sensor dust more pronounced as will other tonal type and sharpening adjustments. So I find myself preforming dust spot corrections through the various steps in the evolution.
- I then made the tonal adjustments to the dark, light and shadow areas to increase contrast.
- I also applied a Sky preset developed by Matt Kloskowski of Adobe Photoshop Lightroom Killer Tips.
Resulting in this first take of the image which was posted to the Radiant Vista Community -
The first suggestion from the Radiant Vista Community was to add some contrast as shown here -
Once everyone had time to digest this edit, a suggestion was made about bringing more of the green out in the dune grass and a slightly more cropped towards the building -
NOTE: up to this point all edits had been done within Lightroom.
I then asked members of the community their opinion about removing distractions such as the sea gull, which can barely be seen and any other distractions. Since this is not documentary or journalistic, I was also open to making “artistic” adjustments.
Response
- remove distractions- seagull and some buildings in background
- square cropping
The removal of the distractions could not be done easily with in Lightroom 1.4. That meant a visit to Photoshop.
Here are those adjustments, along with my decision to bring some of the lighthouse out of the shadows.
Before and after comparison of resulting image from community input -
Comments or additional critiques welcomed.










#1 by MonsieurB - July 28th, 2008 at 16:45
Hi Peter,
I really love the original one…. I like the composition and the colors.
I find that on the retouched one, you’ve added warmth, but it makes the white looks a little yellowish. Of course we see more details on the lighthouse but at the same time we see more of the houses on the other side of the lake. But I think why I really liked the original more, is because it has more dimension to it. Mind you, they are both great shots but the end effect is totally different. That’s what I like about lightroom, you can play around with your photo as much as you like and you still keep the original intact.
Keep up the good work Peter, I really like your blog and pictures.
MonsieurB